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ill read it again

edit: well his magic is a little strong. biggest thing i see about it is its range capability. Its close, far, area of effect, and through eye contact. aAlso, though not as big, does it fatigue, magic drain, depress, etc. all at the same time? if so, having that versitile of range and instantly crippling power may be a lot. maybe if the powers divided up into seprate ranges amd spells. For example, the eyes could have an intimidation effect, the mist could depress, contact could drain magic, and the tentacle like thinges could drain enerygy causeing fatigue. and thats just an example, not saying thats how you should do it.

just a smidge of constructive critisism before books says anything. I don't see anything wrong with the the staffs. could even make for some funny mini arcs, like accidentally using the wrong staff and doing a body switch arc. the staff breaks and they have to find another, lol.
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Well, that's how I planned, having it be separate spells for each. Also keep in mind that the effects of the magic only work while under the burden magic's influence. Once you are out of it, you will realize that you're fine, it's a sort of hypnosis that makes you feel that way, but you actually aren't.

I would love to have an arc like that, or him doing all this work to get a new one, but it ends up breaking. I can't wait