[@BCTheEntity] Can't wait to see the rest of your character. [@Classpet] Just a few things. This takes place in a fantasy world, not on earth. Because of this you'll want to make up new regions to replace "North Africa" and "The Middle East". Secondly you'll want to increase the lifespan of your character, as well as potentially decide if you want to make your character more magical. (Though you don't have to) [b]Regarding your specialized body parts[/b] [i]Wings:[/i] Your wings should always work unless damaged or if your character is physically or mentally exhausted. [i]Stinger:[/i] You use the elements "Air" and "Healing". You'll need to either remove the poison from your stinger, or change one of your elements to poison. [b]Regarding Skills/Spells/tactics[/b] [i]Air:[/i] This is good, though you might want to change the name to something else (You don't have to though) [i]Stinger:[/i] Please change the name of this ability, and also remove the part about you dying from using this attack. (You can take damage from using a skill, but you shouldn't take so much that you potentially die) [i]Go for the eyes:[/i] Please remove the part about a swarm, as your character will largely fight without his/her own species. Also I meant your combat style to be something more like this. (It doesn't need to be as long as the example.) Example: Overwhelming Pressure - The Cutter Leaf goes all out and attacks rapidly focusing solely on the opponent in front of it. This style pressures the opponent into having to focus on defense and evasion to escape damage. Additionally the Cutter Leaf gains a small bonus to dodging close range attacks by moving just enough so that its opponent is only able to graze or narrowly miss. While this is great for one versus one duels, this style of fighting leaves the Cutter Leaf open when dealing with more than one enemy, or when facing attacks coming from multiple angles. Additionally this style does not actually increase the strength of the strikes, it's actually the opposite as the strikes become slightly weaker. Likewise the Cutter Leaf must give up part of it's defense as well, leaving it especially open to strong hits. [i]Healing:[/i] I'll allow this if you remove another one of the skills above. Given you're a bee you can still make honey, it just won't have any healing properties until you gain more experience in this world, or replace one of your above skills. Everything else is good.