[@Carlsberg]

It looks like you're having some trouble determining whether Jen is going to be the defeatist kind of character or the strong one that knows what they're doing. She was all tears and submission during the beginning and now she seems to switch between that and being strong and capable. Like when Kiiros jokingly aimed the unloaded gun at her, I seriously expected her to lash out in panic or get scared, but she did the exact opposite which was a little strange to be honest. It doesn't bother me, I'm just saying it feels little off at times. I've made Kiiros act out of character a little bit myself but just not to the extent where it changed his entire personality.