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I certainly like the idea, I fail to see any application for the character in the game, though. I don't think anyone would let Xafine and her Deathclaw anywhere near them, instead shoot first and ask questions later. Beyond that, call it a pet-peeve of mine, but I am not a fan of blind characters as I find the novelty of their condition runs out over the course of a story. For alterations, I'd suggest you give her a different companion, something that would not alienate her from the plot, and consider getting rid of the blindness.

Other points I have are regarding to her equipment, why would she have a deathclaw gauntlet if she does not have any combat skills? The Deathclaw gauntlet is after all a powerful weapon akin to a power fist, nothing someone who isn't trained in using should use, maybe a simpler, less exotic weapon is in place. 

And I understand that you're Dyslexic, but make sure you look over your work a couple of times before you post it, I find that proofreading works wonders, even if it is OK not to catch every mistake, I too miss plenty of mistakes in my own writing.