[@Leidenschaft] you didn't use hiders. You are banned not only from this RP, but the entire Guild. Please wrap up any existing RPs you are involved with and leave. 

But no seriously, apart from the lack of hiders, I don't really have any major issues. Personally I'd tweak the appearance section because it's a little vague (He looks like a Breton but has an Altmer face and body? What colour are the cold eyes?), but I know that some players like to leave the imagery to either the imagination or to IC description.

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[@Fat Boy Kyle] can I haz shadow magic?
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Uhhh. Hmmm. I don't know. Didn't even know what it was so I searched it on the wiki, and admittedly was a little hesitant when I read "Shadow Magic rivals even the power of the Elder Scrolls themselves, having the power to potentially change the past, present, and future through the manipulation of shadow." I suppose it really depends on where you want to go with it. Having been a part of your RPs I'm fairly confident you wouldn't make a character too OP, so I'm interested to see what you have in mind.