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Bypassing how he found out about the demon deal for a moment he still wouldn't have known when Veiron would fall. The King (who I should really give a name) bargained for a hundred years of paradise in exchange for his soul and his kingdom (the conclusion of this deal opened the Gates of Hell) however through some loophole in the contract the demons collected there prize fifty years ahead of time. Even the King didn't know the fall was coming until a few hours before it happened.

Generally speaking I don't like the term "evil" as it is incredibly absolute but leaving that alone for a moment Tobias has some form of blood disease that over time gives him demonlike traits correct? The magic suit halts the progression of this disease. Now did he get this disease at Veiron or when the ambiguous possibly vampire like demon attacked his mother?

Next the demons wouldn't care who knew about the deal, in fact they'd likely find it amusing seeing at that as public knowledge would cause mass panic. At that point it would be too late to actually break it so the demons don't care. Though the King likely would so you might want to change it from demons to the King declared him an enemy of state and put a bounty on his head type deal.

I'm not totally sure why he'd want to summon the demon that made the deal or why he would do it in proximity of his wife without protection but I can chock that one up to overconfidence and naivety on FT's part.

Aside from that as long as you incorporate everything into your CS you should be good to post.

@everyone, I'm thinking of changing the quote at the top of the OP. I have a number of options and was wondering on your guy opinion.[list][*]"Abandon all hope, ye who enter here."
[*]"The descent into Hell is easy."
[*]"The road to Hell is paved with good intentions."[/list]
Thoughts?