[@Jpp188] Love it. It's cool if you use the Ygar as the ones that altered Duaka, but it seems likely that he would have no idea who or what did it too him. Looking forward to reading more. 

[@Voltus_Ventus] I like Dex a lot. Perfect characterization for a gun-for-hire. I'll be sure to keep rhino-like aliens in mind for future reference.