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Shut up and get your character approved, you Joker wannabe :P
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I'm trying to but 
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"The concept is good to go, but the details may not be. I don't like approving things over PMs unless there are serious problems or the discussion would be long enough to cause clutter in the OOC." 
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nobody's given feedback for the updated version yet so I can't even do small edits while I wait.