[quote=@knighthawk]
These are opinions, not set in stone. some of you I PMed.
[@Crimson Clover]Good, Add 'weakness' and I would suggest 'psychological de-programing' to her skillset given her oigin. 
[@BlackPanther] Good, No utter immortality, yet. And he can be killed with his own carbocanium sword. seperate abilities into 'skills' and 'powers' please. Are you going regular witty crazy or 4th wall knowing you are a forum creation and using ooc in the IC crazy?]
[@Roosan] Good with one limitation, a sword that 'no armor can stop or slow' might have been fine 2500 years ago, but I don't want a sword that slices through anything. since 2500 years ago was still the iron age, I'm okay with adding "no mere iron armor can stop or slow" meaning it can cut through any pure iron and deal loads of damage to steel, but not just one-shot anyone. Also 'skills and powers' along with 'weakness'
[@Archmage MC] I'd like to see a 'skills' and 'powers' section added with 'weakness' and we can see about origins.
[@Clanty]Good, no complaints, please add weakness
[@PhoenixForce]Good, no problems
[@knighthawk]Need to add weakness
[@TimeMasterX]Mostly good, sent a PM, add a 'skills' section.
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Sorry, but what is psychological de-programming? Adding weakness now!