[quote=@Blue Demon]
I'm impressed myself.

<Snipped quote by Sep>You asked.

[hider]1) Spelling error: <Snipped quote> lead not elad. Obviously.

2) I did like the view into Banner's head. +1

3) <Snipped quote>
In tense action scenes shorter sentences convey quickness, a sense of dire-ness, not having enough time to react. I found myself immersed until this point (That I bolded). In my opinion something like:

[i]The small and fragile form of Bruce Banner doubled over. Bullets started to fire. Soldiers moved around him quickly. Seeking to evacuate all they could. Green fists hit the ground. Pavement caved from the force. Broken, shattered, ruined. Green eyes full of anger looked up. Bones grinding and clicking into place. Banner was gone. Hulk stood up. Shirt tearing off as his great chest expanded. His earth shaking roar filled the room. Then silence as he turned to Ross.[/i]

But again, that's just my opinion. But I still thought it was good. Very interesting (despite the fact I'm not a fan of the Hulk/Banner)[/hider]
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How dare you help when I asked you too!