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Nah I appreciate the help, the transitional sequence between Hulk/Banner (Such as the bit you highlighted) I feel has always been one of the hardest ones to write. So I do appreciate the input.
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I hope it helped you some. I've always struggled with being too long winded in sentence length (during action scenes like that). Just something to think about for next time.