A couple things, Bella. One, you mention "scarless," as thought this happened a while ago. At the time of the RP's start, we're essentially going to be waking up in brand spanking new bodies within EXTRA's headquarters. Next, how did she die? You have to understand that the brain has to be pretty much intact for something like this to work, and something cool I like to do at the start is to show the world through the character's eyes as it happened, like a flashback to a most recent memory. Lastly, you mention she's in the Air Force, but for what country? I never once mentioned this would only involve one nation, and an alien occupation would definitely be considered a global affair. Other than those few points, though, it looks good.