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@Rusalka Your chars are pre-approved, but I think Grey has some requests of you. Also, your proposed history with Mithais is fine by me.

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Okay so they return.

I just have a few quicky cents throw into the lot here for clarity's sake.

For Carmine

1) Carmine is a vampire without a lineage history, however was turned in Europe. This is a bit vague as I'm not sure what sort of vampire she is since origins and bloodlines is slightly more important in this thread due to the nature of the globalization that has occurred. We'd like to try and have everyone be able to identity where their vampire would fit if we traced the blood roots back to the original vampires for the sake regulating the vampires/mapping out a family tree. Please consider adding this detail.

2) Her abilities are somewhat undefined. The "Etc" is generally a bad idea to leave in since if you do not make a list of definite powers, then I will assume you powers are indefinite, meaning that you have access to any and every ability marginally related to what was defined as an example. That being said, please flesh this out more to define her limits on what exactly she cannot or cannot do.

3) Related to 1 & 2, as it stands your vampire has no explicit weaknesses. I do not know if she is weak to normal vampire weaknesses, at which I question why/how she could bear to carry all her vampire killing equipment without being weakened herself, or if she has unique weaknesses due to her unique powers and abilities. Balance demands that you really ought to have some form of 'special weakness' or limtation to counter your 'special powers' that set you above the common vampire rabble.

4) Cammie's a 19 year old super-hacker, sniper, mma fighter, and human psychic? Okay I'm finding this a little hard to believe that she learned all her skills within the course of her life. Unless she's naturally gifted beyond gifted, I think this is a bit much to cover so many areas at such a young age. Especially since her backstory states she was in school before she was turned, meaning that in three years, she became an MMA fighter and sniper as a vampire (which is cheating since, vampires are superior to humans anyways in physical sense), all the while she got really good at hacking while still in school possibly? I'd like to see this toned down a bit just a tad, I mean sure Mozart began composing at the age of 4, but he began decomposing at the age of 35.
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@The Grey Dust You do make some valid points I will agree. I'll spruce them up a bit later.
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Here is a link to your app, so people can read it: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92419-the-world-of-blood-compact-accepting-apps-in-oc/char#post-3428308

The changes are much better. I noticed you said the females of your vampires can get pregnant. In that case, I have to classify your vampires as half-vampires. They are clearly not fully dependent on blood, and they are technically still alive enough to procreate naturally. Therefore, they are not going to have as powerful abilities as other vampire bloodlines, sorry. I'll allow that Nia has developed some resistance to their Iron weakness, but overall Amethyst vampires do not heal very well. Also, because they can reproduce, I think they should be long-lived, but not truly 'immortal.'

As far as their behavior goes, they seem to me to be quite feral, almost werewolf-like, in the way they roam and have territories. Perhaps you should completely switch them to a class of werewolf instead of vampire, since werewolves can procreate naturally as well. Up to you if you think that is too drastic a change.

The foul-breath ability that the female amethyst vampires have is probably not going to be as useful as you think. There are some vampires that do not need to breathe. Foul-breah power would certainly work on living things though.

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Here is a link to your app, so people can read it: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92419-the-world-of-blood-compact-accepting-apps-in-oc/char#post-3428308

The changes are much better. I noticed you said the females of your vampires can get pregnant. In that case, I have to classify your vampires as half-vampires. They are clearly not fully dependent on blood, and they are technically still alive enough to procreate naturally. Therefore, they are not going to have as powerful abilities as other vampire bloodlines, sorry. I'll allow that Nia has developed some resistance to their Iron weakness, but overall Amethyst vampires do not heal very well. Also, because they can reproduce, I think they should be long-lived, but not truly 'immortal.'

As far as their behavior goes, they seem to me to be quite feral, almost werewolf-like, in the way they roam and have territories. Perhaps you should completely switch them to a class of werewolf instead of vampire, since werewolves can procreate naturally as well. Up to you if you think that is too drastic a change.

The foul-breath ability that the female amethyst vampires have is probably not going to be as useful as you think. There are some vampires that do not need to breathe. Foul-breah power would certainly work on living things though.


Oh oops I the pregnant paragraph was for a different species thanks for pointing that out. Either they find a child or bite a person several times on the neck and wrists. They cannot actually get pregnant.
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@RedNightHunter Oh ok. No problem. Just update your CS and I will approve it then.
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@The Grey Dust

Okay, I've made the changes specified and fixed a few things. Cammie's age has been bumped up alot more to better make sense her skill range. I wouldn't necessarily say she is the best at everything, but more or less astute. I took out the whole hacker thing though as I looked back on it and figured it didn't suit so well at the time.

Also, they don't necessarily carry their weapons around all the time, maybe their firearms and a few throwing knives, but the swords and rifles and stuff they save for when they're on the hunt. Most of the time, Rebecca and Camille are just searching for evidence of possible vampire activity, and once they have validated proof there is an active coven/single vampire, then they seek them out to eliminate them.
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Shit I need to post a CS.
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@RedNightHunter Oh ok. No problem. Just update your CS and I will approve it then.


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Also I will most likely keep on tweaking the grammar and how the sentences are laid out. It is unlikely I will change a key meaning but if I do I will notify either you or The Grey Dust.
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See @The Grey Dust for all grammar/spelling issues.

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Im gone for five minutes and its gets all third-rike-up-in-here-meow!

Edit: not complaining, but theres quite a few female characters in this game... Rome has got the pick of the litter up in here, assuming he likes hlaf dead super strong fifth element gun toting bitches:) ...ment that as a compliment btw
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Im gone for five minutes and its gets all third-rike-up-in-here-meow!

Edit: not complaining, but theres quite a few female characters in this game... Rome has got the pick of the litter up in here, assuming he likes hlaf dead super strong fifth element gun toting bitches:) ...ment that as a compliment btw


Hey we are vampires not dead ;P Who is Rome?
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Hey we are vampires not dead ;P Who is Rome?


【Rome】 “Anybody up for Marco polo?”
【Rin】 “Hey, when in Rome...”



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Full Name
Roman Petrovik/ Rin-aziel Ohmahazet

Aliases
"Roman" - Rome, The Russian, Host
"Rin-aziel"- Rin, Psi-Vampire

Occupation(s)
Once Roman made his way from Russia to America, he worked part time as a private investigator. Spying on cheating husbands or wives for cash, or catching people comitting insurance fraud. Then showing the video or audio proof just to make a living.

Birthday & Age
May, 4th, 1986. / Found April 1st 2010 (age unknown)

Gender
Male / unknown but prefers female figures

Sexual Orientation
Straight/ NA

Hometown
Siberia, Russia / Unknown

Goals/Faction
Roman had just recently linked up with SOLDIER after tracking him down through Siberia and cleaning up his mess in the old weapons testing facility. Upon learning of his "Situation" with his parasitic partner, they confronted him with a proposition in which Roman would be able to permenantly seperate himself from Rin without killing him or Rin. The only catch is that he lends their unique talents for their cause.

Race/Species
Human / Vampire (Psychic bloodline)

Physical Description
"Rome" - Standing at about 5' 11" 198lbs with dark brown hair and Blue eyes. Well built and lean thanks to his high metabolism featuring a tattoo of an "Anarchy" symbol on his left arm. If you look closely you can see what looks like steam constantly coming off his skin thanks to Rin-aziel. Youll often see him with a cigarette in his mouth to hide this trait. His natural bodyheat is also abnormally high (about 110°f) and you can start to see gray strands of hair on his head. Roman often sports his old leather coat with a built in shoulder holster for his sidearm in the lining. Calling it his "lucky coat"

"Rin-aziel" - She can pretty much take any form she wants. Her very essence resembles that of a shroud of mist. Her physical manifestation of a body is usually that of a female figure. Pulling whatever pictures of women Rome has in his head or on those magazines he reads occasionally. She has no physical surface tension and very cool to the touch. If you touch her, that part will swirl and fade away like pushing through a foggy mist.



Likes
Antiques/ Modern tech
Firearms/ Foggy days
American women/ Posession
Blueberries/ Cigarettes
Marco/ Polo

Dislikes
Arrogant people/ Arrogant people
Cigarettes/ strong winds
Cold weather/ Containment
Rin's bluntness/ Rome's sarcasm
Being apart from Rin/ Being apart from Roman

Personality
"Roman" - Stubborn, sarcastic, and an asshole would be some things a person would call him if they just met him, but if the stopped for a second and payed attention.... he's still a stubborn, sarcastic asshole. Often making jokes at the absolutely worst time and slacking off whenever he gets the chance, but deep down he is kind hearted and would quickly step in front of a bullet for someone he just met (and likes). He has a deep appreaciation for old things like cars, guns, art, music and traditions. He respects other peoples religions and points of views but will not let them convince him it is the "only" way. He always looks for the option everyone else looks over. Searching for that coinflip that lands on its rim.

"Rin-aziel" - Like many old people she is a very patient... umm thing. Being around has given her the patience of a saint, just don't call her one if you value your bodily functions. That being said, she also tends to let her emotions take over when she wishes. Calling it "theraputic" when she lashes out often resulting in something dead, tortured, or gone mentally insane. A vast fondness for all things modern. Ranging from the tech, to the foods (even though she cannot eat or even drink blood anymore) and even the music. ESPECIALLY the music. One of the only things she is grateful for humans to have invented. Often open minded but when it comes to personal safety, survival is priority.

Position Within The Military
Roman was one of the few that could call themselves Spetsnaz after he joined the Soviet millitary at age 17 (forged papers) he was labeled one of the prestigious few to wear the black balaclava. That was until he met Rin. After the "Incident" he needed to leave the country.

Powers, Skills, & Talents
Powers-
Roman and Rin are symbiotically tethered to eachother. Whatever Rome feels, so does Rin and vice versa. They can suppress eachothers thoughts and emotions easily unless under stress. Then they often share a clusterfuck of mixed feelings and thoughts which usually combine into something... dangerous. Rome technically has no powers except for the sole ability to accept Rin-aziel in his body and not die from mental breakdown and prolonged exposure to Rin. Rin is technically a vampire with a physical body long gone thanks to cruel experimentation. Forcing her share Romans mind to survive. Rin can actively release herself from Roman whenever she feels like but prolonged seperation can cause Roman to feel side effects, almost like withdrawls that of a powerfully addictive drug. Making Roman's body feel as if on a permanent adrenaline rush. He can stay focused longer and even "forget" pain momentarily when they are together.

Rin on the other hand can freely move to another host but "normal" hosts tend to wither and die within a couple hours. The severe mental stress of her taking over the body results in madness or dementia in which Rin has no choice but to take full control of her hosts body and thus, killing them out of pity. Roman on the other hand has been with her for over 6 years. During their inital meeting, Rin had tried a full takeover of Roman numerous times, but his mental stability and will is just too strong.

Skills-
Roman is an ex-Spetsnaz soldier born to fight and kill. He has extensive weapons training and superior CQC training. Thanks to Rin he also has a strong mental focus that of which one would feel under extreme duress and filled with adrenaline. Often seeing things as if slower than normal. Ten seconds seem to last a minute and combat is instinctual, like breathing or blinking.

Rin-aziel is old and knowledgeable of many things unknown to the current world. Speaking in many tongues as if they were all fluent to her. (Exe tongues of fire that Jesus' disciples were given) physically pulling the fresh memories of her other "hosts" left her very knowledgeable of mundane things. Remembering passcodes or specific numerical algorythms or manipulation and torture of her victims until she gets what she wants. This can also be a nuisance since the sheer mass of memories often overlap her own.

Talents-
Roman has an affinity for older things and often fills his head with knowledge of older cars, guns, etc. He can tell you the year it was probabbly from and how to use it, just don't ask him to take it apart and put it back together. The only thing he could do that with is his trusty Ak74 and pistol.

Rin-aziel has an uncanny ability with numbers and can remember anything you tell her. A photographic memory of sorts. (This is much stronger when connected to Roman)

Flaws, Weaknesses, & Disabilities
Both Rin and Romans biggest weakness is eachother. If they choose to seperate or forcibly seperate through unorthodox means (exe physical severing of the tether or some forms of exorcism) and are unable to return back to each other, Roman can suffer from massive withdrawl effects like severe headaches, physical and mental weakness, dementia, mania, and possibly death within several hours. If Rin-aziel is left without a host for only a few hours she can die. Slowly evaporating into the air until no more. With no physical mind to keep her together, her mind and psychic will will slowly fragment

Romans secondary weakness is the occasional mental merging of two entities. Temporary loss of memory or rememberance of memories that aren't his own. Loss of identity or excruciantingly detailed nightmares. A good nights rest is rare and almost unheard of. This can be proven from the dark bags around his eyes.

Rinn has an alternative drawback. To consume a host, to absorb their memories, their feelings, their very soul is extremely addictive, almost euphoric in nature. To reside in a body she cannot assimilate and control is almost like a c*ck tease. Driving her insane until she gives into her insatiable pleasure and leaves Roman to find another temporary host. The only way to sedate these addictions is for Roman to let her loose in a controlled area. Everything that Rin posesses MUST be alive or undead and MUST die either during or afterwards in some way. Rin can momentarily control a dead body if she was previously posessing the body while alive.

Rin cannot physically move anything bigger than a quarter(that in itself requires extensive concentration and a tether to Roman. She can pretty much push a button and that's it. She has no sense of touch and cannot feel anything that touches her. She despises this and would give anything to feel this sensation just once.

Even though Roman and Rin share mind and body, they do not share everything. Roman cannot feel if there is a vampiric presence or something otherworldly in the room even if it smacked him in the face without Rin telling him. Most likely she won't since if the entity does not choose to reveal themselves, they likely do not want others to know. Roman has control of his body no matter how hard Rin tries and this in itself can cause problems if she does not agree with something he chooses or vice versa. On the contrary, two heads are sometimes NOT better than one.

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