[@Draconequis]
You can be half veela but it's gotta be wizard/veela. (she'd be a half-breed then instead of half-blood)
As far as inherited powers go she would be able to throw fire when angry and turn more bird like (this is really cool)
Info found on[url=http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Veela] the wiki[/url]

She looks great just a few things and you can move her over;
The formatting, you just gotta go down a line between the white words and the colored ones(see example)
You're face claim is beautiful btw, just wanted to say that
and change halfblood to halfbreed