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@LetMeDoStuff, Posted my CS. Forgot to tag you.
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I am a strong, independent Alpha Company woman and I don't need no Chariot
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Waiting for acceptance intensifies
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@NevixRight, I just read through your thing and noticed a few small issues.

1. His Service Tag. The Tag T331 isn't valid. That's because, if we look at the Greek Alphabet, that would be Tau Company. The only four Spartan Companies that were around were Alpha, Beta, Gamma and Delta. That would apply to the one's in your fireteam who were shown to have 'F' in their Service Tag.

2. I'll get you to do this, but perhaps tidying up a few things, sorry. Like, you put the Armour in twice, which, to be honest, is a bit strange looking. It hurts my lil' mind. ;3;

3. This is more of a question, but has Thomas not been a Spartan for very long? Either he's been training for 10-20 Years, or was just late into the programme and had less than a Year's worth of Service. You also forgot OPERATION: GREY AXE, which'd be found in the list! I'm going to let you deal with that in whatever way you see to be fine, and then I'll pop it into the Character Segment. These are the only Issues I could find, so just the lil' tidy-up and it should be good to go.
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@LetMeDoStuffI'll fix the first two, no biggie, but I'm confused on the last bit.
Spartans are abducted when they're six, don't they all have upwards of twenty years of training? They aren't put into combat at, like, twelve years old are they?
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@NevixAlright, never mind, I think I understand. I fixed everything you pointed out.
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@NevixAlright, never mind, I think I understand. I fixed everything you pointed out.


You....Mentioned yourself in that post? XD
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@LetMeDoStuff...I done goofed
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@LetMeDoStuff
Ran out of time in the day today.I definitely will Finnish by tomorrow!!
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I'll have an IC post up tonight.
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I'll have an IC post up within the hour, I believe.

EDIT: Done and done.
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Posted. That was a long one (for me). I'm damn proud of myself now.
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I'll be writing a post up now, replying to Nevix's involvement and telling the tale of two other Characters.
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@NevixI didn't have time to reply to you or do a second Character, so there's an upsetting story about how Grant's sister Supposedly saved Fireteam Nodachi.
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Done, probably going to make the next post a bit less 'rainbow'
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I posted as well. :)
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Done, probably going to make the next post a bit less 'rainbow'


We're going to run out of colors, lol
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Fireteam Chariot are going to be so pissed with these teams suddenly popping up out of the blue. They strictly didn't want to get the others involved, but with so many it's difficult to argue...
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