Alrighty I'm back :D!!
BTW any changes made to characters are pretty much fine (especially considering that everyone had sucked at potions)

[@Always]
The writing is all good so don't worry about that :>
The coloring is still a thing, you have to choose a color other than white, After words that are capitalized you need to go down a line. For year you need to choose one, You can be either cause she's 17. if you wan her being younger than most choose 7th year, if you want her older chose 6th. :>
Being in Slytherin is fine, It's actually easier for me if everyone is grouped up
Also if it's not to much trouble to choose one particular spell to excel at, I think there's a list online somewhere.
All in all it just needs a little cleaning up, otherwise it's good

[@TheHangedMan]
(the coloring is flipped, if you can fix that that'd be great)
Xolotles are great, I love the patronus,
Maybe chose a different pet, The crowned eagle is native to south America in addition to being endangered so maybe chose a different non-endangered eagle. The white tailed eagle might be a better choice ;>
so it's pretty much good just a few things 

[@Heathen]
Flawless :0c
Go ahead and move him over.

[@Ceta de Cloyes]
The coloring is flipped, and it needs to be centered.
A description of the wands physical appearance would be nice Otherwise looks great
You can fix those things and move him over :>

[@jetipster]
lol it seems like hufflepuff has all the gays
I mean as long as personality/backstory is different from the others nothing is stopping you from adding one more into the mix ;>