[@bluetommy2] remember that you're ability is manipulation of your bone structure not all out shapeshifting. I'd also like it if you can't change the shape of your skull (As that wouldn't be the best thing for your brain to go through). So long as you were in the military you would know how to use firearms, even in the engineering corps you would still be required to keep up to date on how to use a weapon. Perhaps a little more detail on the group that breaks him out and the mission that traumatizes him? Also on that note you wouldn't "Retire from active service" to join the Engineering Corps. You'd request a transfer and the additional training that goes with it. [@Wonderland] On an offtopic note, she's pretty darn cute. Moving onto the review. I've got nothing of note that I don't like. Accepted. [@Sagittarius] I don't mind people having the same ability as everyone else. Also there are always the various elemental abilities, or someone with a physical enhancement. [@ayzrules] That ability is fine, I'd even be willing for you to subtly change how people are feeling (If you want to go into scientific terms it'd probably relate to pheromones). [@vietmyke] ARTEI got fat. I am going to ask, since you're here now and interested in going the route of the USF, do you want to design the military? [sub]I'm also updating the A.I tab that there is an exception to A.I running on Mars.[/sub] If you agree you can just do it in GuildFormat and PM it to me. Also drop by the old stomping ground at some point. [@ravenDivinity] If you have questions, feel free to ask. [@Dead Cruiser] No complaints so far, I look forward to the sample. On another note despite yesterday supposed to be my last day at work, I got called in today as someone is off sick (Go figures) so my afternoon of hashing out as much detail as possible has turned into about an hour of hashing out as much detail as possible.