[quote=@FantasyChic] I made those changes you mentioned. Other than that, was there anything else in my sheet needed to be explained? [/quote] I don't see them in da sheet - but other than those things, the character is fine. [quote=@Archmage MC] I dunno, I'm using Marvel as my template. [/quote] Here's the thing; Stop doing that. This ain't a Marvel RP, and a lot of it's characters are well designed or developed tbh. This RP is leaning more towards Heroes, Misfits, and Worm.