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[@KitzTheFawn] Your character is fine except for one thing.

In the weapons section, you have two weapons. You've got one, with multiple of the same type, that's fine. However, her equipment can just be another space to have weapons. If you look at the other characters, pretty much all (minus maybe two) carry things that do not serve a combat purpose.

You can have the kusarigama (sickle and chain) or the katana, but you will need to choose one or the other and place it in the weapons section - discarding the other. It'd also be nice if you could include and image or description, but you don't have too.

And, if you would, please elaborate more on her skill sets. Not just her combat skills, though those need to be fleshed out more too, but also her non-combat skills - such as cooking, painting, what languages she can speak etcetera.
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And, for future reference, please check the OP to see whether you can just place your character in the character tab. Some roleplays allow you to just make a character and start playing it without being reviewed, but the large majority require review from the GMs before being accepted.

[@Spriggs27] You need to add anything else?
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Well I was gonna say have the skills be a little more descriptive with the skills and more descriptive with the weapons, but everyone else seemed to have just said most of what I would've said. Also might want to use the basic terms Kitz is a rookie rper. 



But yeah [@KitzTheFawn] Listen to what everyone else have said, we are here to help you. Also remember, don't be afraid to ask any questions.