[@vietmyke] Huh XD

Yes you are quite right. 
So let me quote and answer.

"What I'm not okay with, is the extent of his powers, which are, to be frank, excessive."

So you are saying that it is a lot? Hmm. Blinking is LOS limited by default, but it is inside either the rifting or teleporting family of powers. Put aside rifting as it is complicated, having the powers of teleportation manifest in a way of blinking, DOESN'T mean that he is unable to use any other power. This emans that he can Blink as his main ability, and most likely the onyl one he focuses on, but he also got a really tiny bit of the general TP ability. SO he can, what, teleport 1-2 meters through air to any palce behind him? It can't even pass walls, or if he is restrained it doesn't work. You'd assume that an ability that is only secondary has no real "hitting" power, and thus doesn't have the utility of a fully fledged superpower. As for the 43 Blinks under a minute, I think that is very real, because if you just discovered your ability to blink, you'd practice on either flat terrain, and or short distances. 

For argument's sake, I'll nerf his main ability's current power, eg the distance and his casting speed, to 100 metres and an increasingly growing cast time. So that he can't use it too many times. I will, however, if possible keep his short range tp. It is a handy tool he doesn't use very much yet, but later on as he trains it could become potentially useful.

"On to Tobias' second superpower: Capitalism!"

Let me get this straight: he does NOT own teh corporation. His dad does, and he is a trouble kid who doesn't benefit from the company, apart from a motorbike and a dwelling. I wouldn't give my fucking kid a single penny if he kept coming home at 11PM.

"So most PMC's are generally relegated to armed security details and space escorts for private sector companies and individuals."

True, but Enson is also an arms manufacturer. Controls most of the market should also be taken as "having bigger share than any other companies" not a complete scale. I did research for this one, and it is plain that the US has 41 of the weapons market IRL. So in an alternate timeline where there are other planets to take care of too, along with amyn corporations that rise on those areas, we can safely assume that dues to some contract or what not, the UN only has around 30% market share, and Enson has around 35% in addition to manufacturing a few extra guns and robots for the UN. And yes, Enson makes robots (not the V.I. in it necessarely) AND guns. Those are, as you proposed, are given to the UN in a certain percentage, and the rest is sold on teh open market. 

"Because the UN controls the Solar system- they're not about to let anyone else take a piece of their pie."

I covered it before with SEP, and I did say that Enson has no interest in power and control. It is mainly focused on making profits. And they wouldn't stand up agains the UN, who tehy have a contract with, and well their guns to.


In general I see your point. You could say I am also a problem child when making characters, thought here I didn't think my blink's power would be too OP at all. It's liek teh most one sided ability of all time. Even heat can do more than mine, and as such, I thought that having an easy ability could start a BIT more powerful. Anyhow, I'll edit my post to correspond to your thoughts.

Edit: Actually cut the share part. I looked at more graphs, and it seems that the biggest market share corporations, are around 13%, but you'd assume that a unified governement unifies the arms dealing to have a better control. And that Enson would give about 25% of all weapons to the Military. This still means that Enson has around 30% market share of all the INDEPENDANT non governemental market, and as such suppleis around 20% of all UN weaponary.