[quote=@DarkRecon] That...could be a good idea but I have trouble RPing as...arrogant or "higher than thou" types. The split personality that I metion. And I thought about a serious type but she holds a grudge against the framework divisions, especially Lorenzo, because she believes that they pushed her mom so hard that the story she heard was that she committed suiside. Eh. I'm sure there's someone like that in the group already but yeah, someone who doesn't take orders from guys like Lorenzo well. [/quote] What purpose does the split personality serve? I am sorry but from what I have seen, that tends to annoy more than actually work. Ah well. At this point I am going to say, you have an approved character, so you are free to play already. But [u]we do not commit ourselves to expand any plot hooks[/u] you may have had with that character. I also strongly reccomend that you forget about tweaking Mai and start from scratch a new character, if you wish to avoid the duplicity I mentioned. And avoid split personalities and disobedience. That won't end well. Before the first battle, even.