I can see that English isn't your first language now that I'm actually, you know, looking at your app. I hope you don't mind me nitpicking, but... "Firstly he becomed a Monk because" should be "Firstly, he became a monk because", as became is the past-tense version of become. "He's eating the plants he collect when walking in the Woods. That's weird because he is a Crocodile and crocodiles should eat meat but" I think what you mean is... "He eats the plants he gathers while walking in the woods, which is weird because he's a crocodile, and crocodiles usually eat meat, but" messing up tenses and or changing them mid-sentence is really confusing for English-speakers. "Low as to his race, and" might mean... "He's a bit short for his race, and" English is weird, we use 'low' as a position, as in, that shelf is low on the wall, and while it technically COULD mean short, we never use it like that. "Appears in patns, on the feet long Travelling boots ." probably means... "He wears pants, and also wears tall traveling boots on his feet." Again, long refers not to height, but to length... I'm probably still confused just from the wording, also, you misspelled pants. Just a note... we only capitalize the first letter in a word if it's someone's name, or the first word in a sentence. "Fight is last resort, but" might be better worded as... "He only fights as a last resort, but" Again, sorry for all the nitpicking, but... it's a little confusing to read, especially since you seem to have erased some 'enters' which makes a few categories on the CS sort of blend into each other.