[quote=@Hans von Lek] [@Boop_Im_A_Dragon] My problems with it really just boil down to minor nitpicks. I'd say that this works for me. Accepted! If you're really curious, the minor nitpicks are as follows: - I'd prefer if it was just "Omega" in the name section. The binary doesn't really add much of anything to the sheet tbh. - The grammar is a bit wonky in places, but sufficiently comprehensible. - I feel like this is more because I was vague about his name and so it isn't your failing, but the latest Frankstein is Albrecht Frankenstein, for reference. Again, it's my fault. I totally forgot to state his name anywhere. - That's about it, really. None of the above are a serious problem, however. Like I said, the character has been accepted. Of course others are still able to bring up objections if they wish (I mean, it was a contentious character concept when first brought up, after all.) [/quote] Nah that is fine. I kind of added the binary because I wanted this thing where Omega's only speak to each other via binary, but I can understand the feeling it doesn't add anything. If you want I can remove it and go a different route. I just thought it would just be a fun extra bit of roleplay. (Probably should have mentioned that somewhere). As for grammar, yeah I was a bit rushed. I really wanted to get something out as it has been a while, plus I had some other things I needed to get done. Glad I was accepted though. Now I can perform emergency surgery on Clocku just to prove how far tech has come. [@Chairman Stein] Pfft. Whatever you say Dr.Jack Me Off