I like it, kinda reminds me of Jaunty from Shadowman but a much bigger meaner and hungrier version. The only thing that im not so fgond of is the fact you will probabbly have little actual interaction with the players aside from it trying to kill us or others. Great concept but is a multi collaboration roleplay designed to generally coexist with the other players? Sure being a constant threat in the shadows is pretty badass but after a while it would just get tedious no? Plus the gm would have to sidetrack his main story to make way for this lurking beast thing constantly out to kill us (or npc's)

I know im nobody in this discussion and you have every right to ignore my criticism even though your character is one well imagined and pretty damn badass character, having minimal ways to interact with the other players as well as not being able to be seen in public would severely limit your roleplaying abilities.

Its gonna be a tough challenge, i know it would be for me. That being said, i like the character too much to say no :) but if you think your up for the challenge and GM's give the ok. You got my vote :)