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Lovely. I'll ignore Ideology and Warfare for now, as you marked them as WIP.

But! The background section is nice. There's a lot of potential for sub-plots, as well, here and there. The first thing that comes to mind: would you care to write some lore for those 'mobile bases'? Like, some technical stuff that I can put in the Technology section of the codex? You don't have to, but as you mentioned them, you probably have a decent idea of how they would work.

*Helston, no 'e' at the end. Anyway, I'll place Concordia on the map the next time I edit it! Yet another thing you can write lore about, if you would be interested in it, and create sub-plots for. Maybe something about Jack's father?

At first I was a bit confused about the timeline there. I assumed the 'Event' you described to be the Calamity and the emergence of the Mordrem, which was twenty years ago. But, then you described a bit of delay: "At first there were no signs of anything being wrong", so I think you're right on track.

You can just put the names of the Aspekts in the section, no need to indicate what they do.

Anyway, looks really good so far! Healing bots are always welcome. Keep at it, there's still plenty of time.