[quote=@Inuyasha]
As far as the Wei Shen qualm goes; I see where you're coming from. I did take inspiration from Sleeping dogs (as evident by the picture and appearance & name), however changing his backstory kind of seems like a different character to me. I mean isn't that what makes a character; his story? I would not say I copied Wei Shen's character, however I drew inspiration from that cast of characters as I wanted to make a Triad character. [u]For instance, if I was to take away the name and appearance of my character you would not believe my character was Wei Shen.[/u] I dunno, just my thoughts.
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You do have a bit of a point there. That was just my note.

[quote=@Inuyasha]
Im going to try and think of ways I can make umbrakinesis make more sense, possible ideas are 
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[*] Elaborate more on the cloaking/teleporting/pocket dimension whilst completely axing powers of solidification. This would operate under the presumption that cloaking was a light manipulation (manipulating absence of light in this case) and explore darkness portal powers more thoroughly.
[*] In terms of physics, an object is said to be dark when it absorbs photons, causing it to appear dim compared to other objects. For example, a matte black paint does not reflect much visible light and appears dark, whereas white paint reflects much light and appears bright. Therefor manipulation of darkness on a scientific level is a manipulation of photons.
[*] Shadow dimension (?) [this would hinge a little more on paranormal][/list]
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The first point would work best, I believe. Second idea does make sense. Third idea is a whole 'nother discussion.



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[quote=@Nytem4re]
Sorry for being inactive. Last week was pretty much all tests and essays jammed into one week, so I didn't have much time to do much. And with easter and everything... but I can post now, if you'll still have me. 
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[quote=@FantasyChic]
Yeah, Easter has been busy. Busy busy weekend. I can have my next post up tomorrow.
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I was pretty busy, too. Due to classes and stuff. Though, I should be fine for a bit. I do wish to see posts from both of you.

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A triple helping of new characters.

All tied to each other.

My favorite!

[@EstABest] She seems good thus far, I just want to know the upper limits of her power. How strong can her sound attacks go? Love the Jojo reference btw.

[@FamishedPants] I think you need to define the ability a bit better. So his power is basically portals, and temporarily splitting objects? I'm a tad confused on that, and I think it could use some more limits.

[@ADamnFiddle] Now her power is the one I've been having trouble with. I'm really not sure what exactly she can do because you were vague on it. Perhaps you can add a few examples of what she's capable of? I also find it odd that a "Natural slacker" that "gets by doing the bare minimum" can be good at the other three skills you mentioned. :P