[quote=@Pirouette]
[@Mr Allen J] Alright. I need to read the front page a bit more to get a sense of what is going on. 
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Take your time, and direct any questions you have to me.


[quote=@Pandapaw23]
Hey can I also get some suggestions for my character too? I want to make my guy a kinda a snarky, high schooler but I feel that he's just kinda plain and I'd like to make him more interesting.
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Hmmm... Plain isn't bad, but this is a tough one, but take a look at this:

https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/28vbfi/ot_looking_to_develop_your_characters_heres_100/

Otherwise, I'd look at characters made by other people [i]you[/i] find interesting and study them. Think about what makes them interesting to you.