[@Vocab]Looks a lot better, seems like the blessings of boobloli worked! :lol

My only issue with it now is the sword you mentioned; is it an actual sword or something like a kendo sword/bokkun?

As a side note, is he still in contact with his sister? It'd be an interest dynamic to see how she'd play out with her bro in the Survival Game if you wanted to add her. Your choice ofc.

PS: Ketchup isn't a gender either >.>