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1) You mix your personality and history a bit and I will admit that its a bit confusing.

2) As I've stated previously, Japan has some pretty strict gun laws; customs would have never let her bring a gun in most cases and even then, unless she lives in the middle of nowhere or has a personal sound proof gun range, people will hear the gunshots and will report her to the police.

3) Some of the things in her Misc section can easily be put into more appropriate categories.

All in all, I'd recommend just adding a bit more to her and reworking your CS so its more coherent and fluid, some extra meat would be nice too ^^