[@Adelynn Ryder] It’s a pretty good first draft! There are just a couple of things we need to spruce up before your little Annabelle is ready to go!

On your dislikes you need to list a couple more things. They don’t have to be big, anything from cigarette smoke to not enjoying being too hot, etcetera. You’re bio is a really nice length though, and gives us a great idea idea of what her character is about as a person. Nice work!

On your theme song it would be pretty nifty if you could link us to it. I see by your post count that you're a little new here, so if you needed some help on formatting I could PM you and show you a thing or two, if you wanted!

Here is an example of a finished profile. Your’s doesn’t have to be formated like this with all the colors and headers and what not, but it’ll give you an idea on the amount of likes and dislikes you need and what the theme song area should look like.


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[b][color=papayawhip]Name:[/color][/b] Nori Haywood
[b][color=papayawhip]Age:[/color][/b] 23
[b][color=papayawhip]Height: [/color][/b]5'4 ((About 163 cm))
[b][color=papayawhip]Weight:[/color][/b] 113 lbs. ((About 52 kg))

[b][color=papayawhip]Likes:[/color][/b] [i]”Coffee is my favorite thing on the planet!”[/i]

Club/dance music, dancing, forehead kisses, flowers, strong coffee, people with a sense of humor, road trips, dogs, whiskey, video games, pretty dresses, blue eyed men, being snarky, crowds, her cellphone, cooking, tattoos, sushi, true crime tv shows, and manga.

[b][color=papayawhip]Dislikes:[/color][/b] [i]“I used to not like the smell of cigarette smoke but...it’s kinda growing on me, y’know?”[/i]

Paper cuts, apples, violence, cold showers, cows (she thinks they're terrifying), spiders, doing laundry, jazz music, vodka, snobby people, thunder, traffic, windows vista.

[b][color=papayawhip]Party Trick:[/color][/b] She's pretty badass at shadow puppets! :)

[b][color=papayawhip]Profession:[/color][/b] Works at Shine City Investigation Services during the day and part-time as a DJ at Club LUSH on the weekends.

[b][color=papayawhip]Personality:[/color][/b] Nori has an adventurous spirit, thrives on action, and loves anything that gets her adrenaline up. This of course makes her a bit of a risk taker, which often gets her into sticky situations. It also means that she can get bored easily if she feels like she isn't doing something productive. When it comes to the people she cares about, Nori is loyal to a fault. If she sees someone bullying one of her friends she will not hesitate to call them out on it. She is a bright, confident, funny girl who is full of sarcasm and doesn't let anyone push her around.

[b][color=papayawhip]History:[/color][/b] Nori grew up the only child of two loving, lower-middle class parents in a rural farming community and even though she was happy, she always longed for the big city life. So when she turned 21, she moved to Shine City to follow her dream of being a professional DJ. Nori quickly learned that none of the radio stations would hire her without experience and she began to lose hope, until she saw a flyer that said Club LUSH was looking for part-time DJs. The young blonde was hired on the spot and while she was excited to be doing what she loved, it wasn't quite enough to pay the bills. So she had to take on another job at the local flower shop to make ends meet.

Then, through a series of increasingly bizarre events, she was targeted by a serial killer, her apartment set on fire, and she ultimately lost her job at the Enchanted Florist. It was alright though, because that’s how she met one Detective Oliver Holland.

He gave her a place to stay and through good old fashioned detective work they managed to apprehend and put The Weatherman behind bars. The case was over and there was technically no reason for Nori to hang around anymore, but she couldn’t quite bring herself to leave Shine City Investigation Services. The two grew closer as they continued to spend more and more time together and before long they struck up a romance.

Sure, he smoked like a chimney and sort of looked like a mummy whenever he was all wrapped up in those silly bandages of his, but he was funny and charming in his own weird, sarcastic way, and Nori couldn’t be happier.

[center][color=papayawhip][h3]Other Information[/h3][/color][/center][hr][b][color=papayawhip]Theme Song:[/color][/b] 
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[b][color=papayawhip]Relationship Status:[/color][/b] Has been dating Oliver for about two months now. 
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[@Delta44] I do love Ryoki, but I'm sure whatever other character you make will be great too! I'm playing a different girl this season, but I’m gonna keep Nori in the background for the boss, since he thinks she's neat. ;)

As for the time skip, [@Dynamo Frokane] said that it's summertime now, so I believe it’s been four to five months since the last season.

[@Haeo] I sort of glossed over the weatherman in Nori’s updated CS, but he was apprehended and there are no more serial killers in Shine City, nor will there be anything like that this season! Shine City Investigation Services only deals in petty criminals, catching cheating spouses, and finding lost pets now. XD