[@tex] Please avoid saying Mary Sue. It's just a pet peev of mine. The reason I don't like it is because it encompasses so many things that could be an issue. Also I will say this I actually know some girls around the age of that character that could do all that with the deer except for dragging it. Also I personally want someone to say something about my character cause everytime I post I feel really reluctant to hit that blue button cause I can't tell if it is making sense to others or not or if it's reasonable.