[quote=@Vermillion]
[@DeepestApology]

I like the outline, but some of it need just needs checked for grammar. In particular the first section 'critic' and an abrput end to Stevensons role when first mentioned :)

After that, this is fine.

The CS are for reference all in all, not to look pretty, but ease of read is essential :)
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Understood. I am not a native speaker, so I am directly going to rewrite the whole section. It will prove a good opportunity to add further depth into Tyler's backstory ;)