I have already given [@Yennefer]'s additions a look, they're good by me.

And it's worth reminding everyone that all those of us who thought our legion sheets were complete need to add two more categories, one small, one big; Legion strength (just a couple of words) and Dramatis Personae (a whole lot of words). Every legion needs a least a handful of named important NPCs, like company captains and veteran astartes. The details are in the legion sheet template on the first post in the OOC.