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[@The Grey Dust] My writing isnt perfect either. If I saw a problem with your writing, you would have known it after the first post. Those not up to par so far have been informed and are being given a single chance to improve. Feel free to continue writing as you wish. I rather enjoyed your entry, personally.
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Oh my last post was a tongue-in-cheek jab at my own style. But yes, if it does get too purple, do tell me. I tend to mix in terse, choppy lines with flowing ones to give it a mix of styles.