[@Rethel34] Okay, I think I fixed all the issues presented. I wasn't sure if you wanted me to nerf the Force abilities or remove them entirely, but what I did was nerf them and put some limits on them to show that Roka isn't very skilled in them. The justification I had for Fold Space was that the man who studied with the Aing-Tii was not a Force user, and even he could use this ability with little effort, and so I figured that someone who [i]is[/i] talented would be able to learn it more quickly and better. However, I understand the concern and have made the power less game-breaky.

The mention of his parents is still there but toned down, I'm still not 100% sure it'll work but I'll leave that up to you.