[@Eklispe]

Hi there, since I'm here now, I'll leave a review of your character.

- The first and second paragraphs of his personality are conflicting in some points, like. He's eager to make friends, but also walls people off? That seems like a counter productive behavior that, while not impossible to consolidate *cough*Hedgehog Dilemma*cough*, would require more explanation as to not make it look like he's a mad man.

- I would suggest a more portable instrument, because something that big will likely cause you trouble sometime, but that's just a suggestion, you don't have to take it if you don't want, just be aware of my note.

- I didn't got how his weapon works, a clarification might be needed.

- As far as power goes, I think it's fair, but I don't see how the dampening power can escalate with time, it should be powerful the louder he sings.

- On the Spirit, the first power is mostly ok, but there's an inconsistency. A core should be a rigid center (otherwise it's just more goo, defeating the point of having a core), thus she shouldn't be capable of completely bypassing any place where her core doesn't fit.

- For her second power, I just want to say that she can only absorb things that count as Earth matter. That is, earth, sand, rock, minerals, metals, etc. She' not able to able absorb any other matter, specially organic matter, considering that she's a lump of mercury. By the way, increase her weight, if she's human sized and made of metal she should be much heavier than a person, at least 3 times.

As always, you should take into consideration anything that [@TheWindel] and [@Lonewolf685] might have to add. I'm waiting for a reply.

See ya.