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i mad e a neW chaRACTER,, WHY THE FUCK iS THE CHAraCTER shEET SO LOGN, ,, --- ok lets get down 2 business

[@Undine] the chuuni npc is gonna see her as his manic pixie girl n itll b hot n embarassin bc  le ts b real, ,, real life is, ,, 

[@The One] If the only thing that you'll be editing is the background, I might suggest taking a step back and scrapping the whole thing, because honestly this is unacceptable. I'll let the age slide and let him have a moment of a doubt that he was held back, and arguably having a 20 year old prince knee deep in elementary school kids who are a hassle could be hilarious, but the rest of the profile makes it seem like this will be the opposite of a joke fest-- which, as I have made very clear, this RP is supposed to be.

This RP is comedy first, badass second. So, to have a guy who was admitted solely because "his parents wanted him to make friends" is unacceptable because why, in heaven's sake, would a king and queen or whatever other royal court, send their son into a [s]prison[/s] school of delinquent to make friends? Not only will they be a bad influence for what already looks to be a shitty and arrogant son, but the image would be terrible for whatever country, with the news that the prince is playing nice with possibly the [i]worst[/i] kids in the world. He would be better off playing protagonist in a better rich school with better rich superpowered kids.

Furthermore, me making this dissertation on your character sheet probably already has a higher word count than your sheet itself which is a [i]problem[/i]. Nevermind the OPness of your character's ability (controlling both light/fire and darkness? What RP universe do you live in where such a combination is allowed?), the fucking Restraint is... less than desirable. If you took even a two second glance at other sheets you can see that Restraints have to do at least with the Power they have-- which it doesn't, and is making me think holy shit you probably won't read this because there's too many words.

I'm gonna cut this short because I just had that realization and basically- scrap the whole idea, start from the bottom. I can deal with an asshole, but I need an asshole with depth. Bakugou from BNHA is a huge dick, but is believable because he's more than a one sentence description. If you need assistance in making a sICK character with depth and decency, feel free to talk to me, I have honestly been playing with this idea for years and I am not about to let it suffer because you want to play someone OP as fuck.

Also please change the image. This is last because it's more personal taste than anything.