[quote=@Delta44]
[@rocklee] I wouldn't say you were "in trouble"; rather, you were advised on the way things run here, further increasing your knowledge of roleplaying! :3 I still learn new things about RP and myself every single day in regards to writing, and everyone here was once an amateur in regards to roleplaying at some time. 

Despite this, we continue writing so we can get better at it and, most of all, have fun with others! If you felt discouraged or apologetic, don't - we're all very understanding people and we can understand circumstance can make things a royal pain in the butt! :P

I gave your app a looksie in Dollie's place. Might be a little short for her tastes, however it looks really good in my opinion! Consider your app accepted, unless another GM says otherwise. :D
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Oh thank you! I do need improvement so this really helps. This is only my second RP and i feel like a took a very big bite with this one but I think I can do it!