[@Crimsonpirate] Ok, I will go through one by one what you need to do. 

First, add an appearance, I'd like some sort of picture please. I make the Cs the way I did for a reason, you shouldn't be changing it unless you got a good reason to. 

Second, make your personality bigger. You did good on your bio but your personality is crap.

Third, optional though. Give yourself psychic, and expand on your second power, transmutation. 

Fourth, separate the two powers to Power 1: Power 2: 

Five, give your pet an appearance, species, age isn't so important but has to have a reason for no age.

Sixth, grab 

Sentimental attachment: Darren (ferret)

Likes money/commodities and alchohol

Dislikes Irrationality nonsense and ciggarettes 

and put it all in your first post as I am going to request the post to be deleted. It is a waste of space and I want it to be clean.