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It was fairly hard to follow I even re-read it a couple of times and couldn't fully understood what you had posted, sense it mostly just made no sense in a few sections. I did state about the telepathically though you should of still mentioned something to point to that he was doing it telepathically for the roleplayers so they can understand what's going on even if their characters don't. not to mention you made it sound like he just walked into an already made circle and everything, not to mention not to sure about where the element comes in to affect the summoning.