[@Eviledd1984]

Well, now that's an... interesting CS, though there quite a lot of issues with it, at least on my view point. Here are they, in no specific order of importance:

- Since this is an anime inspired RP and everyone else has anime images, or descriptions, for their characters' appearances I think you should do so as well. At the very least to avoid a huge dissonance between your character and the rest. I could elaborate it from a personal POV, but I think it's not the pint here.

- His history/personality (though this one is less an issue then the first) needs a serious expansion, there's pretty much nothing there at all. At least make sure it's one decent sized paragraph long, so we don't feel like we are interacting with a card board cutout.

- For his avatar, please specify which subclass you picked, since it's kind necessary, once you reach level three. You can't go on with out one, even if it's just for us to gauge if you abilities match the archetype you chose at least in part.

- Talking about feats, I believe you've made a mistake between them and feats. Abilities are custom powers unique to your character and no one else. You have to create them on your own. While feats are preset system skills that you pick one when you reach the appropriate level. Currently all your abilities are actually feats, but you haven't picked the one feat you are truly allowed to have. This is by far the most serious one and that needs correction before proceeding further with the character, please give it some thought and if you can't have any idea, look over the CS tab for examples of how to do it/ask us about some suggestions.

See ya.