[@NyanCaxx] Gonna deny the character for now, there's a few issues I have with the CS: [list][*]I think she should be a bit older, closer to 30 than 20 at least. Not many well known bounty hunters are as young as she is. [*] What exactly are the stealth field generator's capabilities? Does she become totally invisible or is it just like an active camo thing? How long can it be used for? Does it short out from anything, maybe water? [*] What about the ship's stealth generator? How long does that go for? Does it use us power in other parts of the ship? [*] Her backstory could use a bit more to it. When did she train extensively in Enhani martial arts? What was she like before the cybernetics? Where did her life start? Was she a poor girl on a backwater planet? Was she a slave? How did she become so obsessed with becoming the perfect hunter? What made the Empire take notice of her as a bounty hunter? I do like the character idea, it's pretty cool. Just a few changes are needed. [/list] [@Specter189] Within realistic reason still, I know its a sci-fi universe and all. A cycler rifle is a weapon of the Tuskens who are native to Tattooine, so unless your character raided their village or something it's unlikely they'd have one. Nothing wrong with a typical blaster. If you want your char to be a walking arsenal with multiple weapons then that's cool, as long as there's enough flaws to the character.