Alrighty, here's a CS attempt. What do you think? [hider=Krimzon krumpaz] Force Name: Krimzon krumpaz Force Type: Ork freeboota fleet. History: The fleet was created when a couple of vessels lost interest in how a warlord did his waaaagh. Simply not enuff dakka. The fleet simply gave the warlord the finger and left. Following a warp mishap however, the fleet was stuck in the warp for perhaps longer than necessary. When they got out it seemed like nothing had changed, except a squig or two looking a bit odd. For some reason a lot of the boyz started showing tendecies as doks after this incident. Which resulted in more and more strange eksperiments. The old warbosses were after a while "upgraded" with squig catapult brains, a very effective contraption that not only exchanged the recipients brain with a squig, it also at the press of a button (which the doks had the remotes for, or were voice operated with the keyword waaaagh) launches the squig violently at their opponents. This resulted in painbosses taking over the entire waaagh, and the entire ork host basically become cyborks. The dokz find deamons fascinating and have tried to eksperiment with that as well. However while the experiments haven't lead anywhere, deamons usually don't attack the warband for some reason, and the warband don't attack deamons either in fear of da dokz. The fleet has now arrived at the borders of the Tímise Énosis, or as the krumpaz call it. Timid enoz, or even simpler the current fightin' place or similar. Headquarters: The fleet is commanded from the ork battleship "Da Krimzon deffbringa." The entire force is spread out among the fleets several kroozers and roks. Each one is commanded by a painboss kaptin. Numbers: Enough for a proppa scrap! Strengths: The force feature heavy cyborkification, and the fleet has a massive supply of squig gas, which powers many of the crazier upgrades. All sorts of dok eksperiments are hidden within different places in the fleet. The Krimzon krumpaz has a large supply of trukks, and a massive amount of dakka, mostly big shootas but also kustom mega blastas and zaap gunz. The entire waaagh is very shooty. And da boyz are tough and fast! Tactics: Being essentially a speed freak cult, they focus on blitz attacks on unexpected places, if possible they drop roks from orbit at the enemy as well, filled with boyz, shooting the foe into nothingness and driving off at ludicrous speeds. That way they are both sneaky and shooty. Which suits the Krimzon krumpaz well. Mortal enemy: Dunno, they are tall an' lanky, loads'a 'eadz. No feet an' floatin' around. Ain't aroun' here, but dey be our worst enemy. Notes: The Krimzon krumpaz love red, and paint it all over the place. This of course makes them go fasta. [/hider] [hider=Boss.] Name: "Bad dok Krumpa git-eata" Admirul of da Krimzon krumpaz. Gender: Ork. Race: Ork. Ranks: Admirul, warlord, painboss, ded killy, (self styled) handsome. Personality: Krumpa usually stands around his bridge on the deffbringa, grinning with his several gold teef and wearing his fancy hat with the jolly ork and a radar dish for scanning patients and/or eksperiments. He likes to eksperiment and to use deamony bitz and try to attach them to things. It usually doesn't work but he likes trying. In a fight he prefers zooming along in something fast and shooting at gitz. Usually avoiding melee since he gets to stuck in trying to eksperiment and forgets about fightin'. Bio: Krumpa is a rather big painboss, with a cybork body, none of his limbs are his own and he has a squig gas boosta attached to his body which he installed himself when he was bored one day. His left arm is a bionik kustom mega blasta. His right eye is a zoomy eye, which is useful for zooming. Equipment/weapons: Apart from the built-in kustom mega blasta and the squig gas boosta Krumpa has 'eavy armour and a syringe shoota wiv more dakka. About 4 barrels which rotates independently and shoots a ded killy amount of syringes filled with all sorts of eksperimental juices. He also carries a ded rippy choppa which is motorized so he can amputate parts really fast. On his shoulder a mutated face-biter squig sits, it lacks eyes, has a really long tongue and bat wings. It constantly emits fiery smoke and it has a constant wide leer. He has a really fast hovva speeda that was procured from some fish-'eadz and orkyfied. Mainly with red paint and loads of squig gas jet engines. It's really fast. It's also open topped, which is good, then all his big 'uns can shoot from it while they fly around shootin' gitz. General Staff Name: Krumpaz big 'uns. Rank: Painboy nobs and/or just regular nobs. Equipment: Yes. Personality: Usually has about the same idea as Krumpa, they like getting in a brawl a bit more, but listen to Krumpa. [/hider] There is one thing i can't really decide myself it feels. How many of everything is "Enough for a proppa fight."?