[@Klomster] So several things Klomster

1. Please read the OOC, it clearly states all Character sheets are to be PMed to me for approval, not posted in the OOC

2. 'Numbers-Enuf fer a proppa scrap' is not acceptable. Yes its orky to say that, but you need an actual number for in game casualties, otherwise to me and other players you have a virtually infinite horde(which is obviously not allowed)

3. 'Genereal staff: Equipment: Yes'? What does this mean? Thats meant to be a template for several members of your general staff.

4. Squig brain catapults are... odd... I'm not sure how I feel about them

5. ORks can't start to 'be more like doks' because being a dok is a hardwired thing, its not really an occupation so much as something doks 'was jus' born ta do'

6. Its a bit... lacking in detail or explanation of events, nothing is explained well in your sheet

If you wish to try again, feel free to edit your CS and [b]PM IT TO ME[/b] you can.

Remember folks, this is not a first come first serve basis sheets are picked based on quality