[quote=@Hellis]
AWw..
 

Those are very fair points all around. Sad to not have made the cut, but I tried and I got some good critique out of it. Good luck to you accepted lot! You are in good hands. I'mma change my profile with the stuff pointed out and keep it around for future use if nothing else!
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Like I'm saying on Skype, it's a great start for a character and if it wasn't so many sheets, I'd have no problem accepting the character after a revision or two! Feel free to work on the sheet, and we'll get you on the Reserve, ready to be inserted like a manpon at any moment!