[quote=@liferusher] I like it, Maybe you can write a little more backstory of him to give you character more depth. What you have now as backstory isn't really backstory but more something you would put down as sidenote or put it in his personality. Still I dont complain if you don't want to do that, just making suggestions for you :) You can post him in the character tab after Zelly gives green light. [img]http://i.imgur.com/ImLvaHD.gif[/img] [/quote] [quote=@Zelosse] That boy is all kindsa strange. I like it. As for the history, if you wanna add in a bit about where he comes from id be very appreciative. Nothin' huge. After that he is accepted and you may place it in the winners circle. [/quote] Okay, I'll add more to his backstory [quote=@Inertia] [@The ghost in black] Am I free to comment on his robe? I'm making Luke comment on his robe xD. [/quote] What do you mean by that O.o" ?