[@POOHEAD189], great stuff so far. Here's what you need to do.

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-You're off to a good start with Dax's personality, I want you to expand it some more.

-Specify the type of two-handed weapon, and add how he reached adeptness with it.

-Dax's weaknesses are fairly negligible. You got to have something that actually gets in his way.

-Make sure you set the dividers properly. It's hr without space. I only spaced it because code hider doesn't work with hr. There are also other minor formatting errors; please smooth those out.

-Racial abilities are considered traits rather than spells; remove it from spells section.

-Gold coins are called Septims, Skyrim big cats are Sabrecats; make sure proper names are spelled correctly.
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[@Dervish] and [@Leidenschaft] might give have suggestions as well, so keep an eye out for them. Other than that, I am looking at a solid character.
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Lore: Open ground doesn't have snow, though small pockets of ice might exist. The only places where ice doesn't naturally are interiors (ex. College Midden).

I'll move Ariane, Keegan and Farid forward after a few more posts. You guys are free to control the seven NPC sailors.

Edit: 5 people/wraiths, not 6; miscounted earlier.