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[@gcold][@Dervish]I had a bit more time to think on Dax, I appreciate it! Thank you for looking him over. I will edit accordingly tonight. 
I'll probably ask some questions as well, but one I have now is for weaknesses. I couldn't really think of one other than taking away a limb or finding a reason why he'd be more susceptible to say, lightning magic or something. I looked through the accepted characters and many of them (not all, granted) had 2 or so weaknesses that were purely mental/social. 
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If it helps, I've used this list before when picking out flaws.
[url=http://www.darkworldrpg.com/lore/flaws.php]Character Flaws [/url]

Also, to everyone else, I've updated Sevine's CS, just for shits and giggles, as I was a bit bored, I revised her background, and included a section for how she back known as [i]The Huntress[/i]. I even changed her picture to something more...representative? Face wise. Lemme know if I made a boo-boo, but I hope you like it.