[@Pie Flavor]

I gotta say that I didn't understood your character at all, except for a few things, he's too old for a Torch (since they are expected to live much less than the original), Tenmokuiko was a big exception, but it's unlikely any Torch like him will ever exist again. The only way for a Torch to live that much would be having the Midnight Lost Child inside them, which I don't need to say that is a no no.

His history didn't matched his age as well, there wasn't duct tape 100 years ago, for example and the school system was very different, specially on Japan.

He can't be both a Torch and a Flame Haze at the same time, Crimson Lords only contract Humans, that is a fact.

Also, he can't have an "extraordinary amount of Power of Existence" only Crimson Lords have that, Humans are miserable sources of Power of Existence, which is why torches die fast.

I suggest you to PM both [@TheWindel] and I, so that we can help you rebuild your character in a more appropriate way.

[@Gilgex]

I'll take a look at your character later. I'm sorry for the delay.