The character looks great to me. You might want to add a note about her parents in the backstory, but if that's not really important to the character at all I won't force you to. It's fine the way it is in that regard. Maybe you could say a bit more about what she's been up to lately? I haven't mentioned it yet, but we'll be starting in the village of [url=http://zeldawiki.org/Rauru_Town]Rauru[/url], a small town on the southern end of the Nuun Highlands. It's a popular waystation for travelers as it's a convenient stop on the road from Lynna City out to the mining town Darunia, but it's also somewhat close to the Fairies' Woods. You can choose to incorporate that into your backstory or not, but it might be wise to have some explanation for why she's in the area. You didn't know that though, so it's not your fault. Great job!